Saturday, April 22, 2017

The Mercenary by Jone Brown

eBook Short Story
The Mercenary by Jone Brown is an erotica short story approximately 18 pages in length.

I was able to download The Mercenary by Jone Brown to my Kindle for FREE from Amazon some time ago, but for some reason I am no longer able to find this short story on Amazon's website!

Below is my unbiased review of The Mercenary by Jone Brown.

This short story was bad, really bad story/plot wise. There was potential for The Mercenary by Jone Brown to be a good read, but the author chose to make it primarily all about 'insta-connection' and rough sex between the two main characters. The way in which the main characters interacted seemed all wrong, especially Sarah's character. Sarah is portrayed as a good girl in her 20s who is still a virgin and the daughter of a US Senator. She wants to lose her virginity and doesn't seem to care with whom she hooks up to lose her virginity... A goodie two shoes just doesn't rush off with some guy she just met and barely interacted with at bar to have sex with, especially if she's a senator's daughter and might be kidnapped for ransom. So, long story short, Sarah's actions in The Mercenary seemed fake for what a real person would do. 

And why does every man in an erotica story have to have a ginormous penis and be a pro in bed?? Get real writers! 

I also thought the sex scenes between Hunter and Sarah were too rough for a virgin. And no talk of using condoms during sex between two strangers occurred either.

Let's just say The Mercenary by Jone Brown left me cold.

The following is a plot summary for The Mercenary by Jone Brown from Goodreads:
Hunter was hired to make sure Sarah has an accident to send a message to her father. But Hunter can’t do it. What’s a mercenary to do when he can’t do his job?
I am giving The Mercenary by Jone Brown a rating of 1 star out of 5 stars.

Until my next post, happy reading!

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